Jormag's ice does not melt

By SteezSamurai on June 2nd, 2017
Race: Norn
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Green
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Saresha was only 12 years old when she got cursed during one of Jormag's attacks in the north. Her parents both sacrificed their lifes to give her a chance to grow up save in the far west. Her new home was the Maguuma jungle, a pieceful place where she learned to make use of the curse given to her by the dragon to hunt animals for food. But it wouldn't last long... soon the jungle changed... the animals and plants were no longer easy prey for Saresha. Mordemoth has awoken... and now she is fighting an Elder Dragon with the power of another..


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jesandsteven
Fashion Guru
A very creative use of ice elements. The dye works is just awesome. Gold from me.
2017-06-03 1:00

Mihrean
Fashion Guru
I love your skin choices, and the idea of her being inflicted with permanent ice comes across well in your story, look and screenshots. Your screenshots are also beautiful- particularly the main look one which I love.

Something, for me at least, isn't quite right with the dye choices. I get that the green blends with her hair piece, the gold with the warhorn/tattoos and the ice is required for your theme (and also they all work with the frostforged dagger) but I also feel they all kinda compete to be the focus of the look as they are quite bright. Maybe slightly toning down one of them would help? I dunno, maybe I'm being too picky as colour choice is such a personal thing...

Gold certainly. I hope I didn't come across as too critical. It's honestly just a tiny niggle!
2017-06-03 6:48

SteezSamurai
Stylist
Thank you for your comment and suggestion. In game the green is a little darker, I just edited the screenshots a little to make them slightly brighter and more colorful. Could've been a litte too much ^^
2017-06-03 9:07 in reply to Mihrean

Mihrean
Fashion Guru
Ahh that might be it! Now I know it's an edit it's fine. I just couldn't put my finger on what was bothering me: not that there's anything wrong with editing per say.
2017-06-03 10:09 in reply to SteezSamurai

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
I really like the story you gave her and I think your armour choice and the tattoo on her face does go well with that background
The screenshots are also really nice!
I can´t get on board with the general dye choice though, green just feels off to me (even if the original might be a little darker)
I´d maybe try more of a turquoise instead or a sandy beige to enhance that oriental feel she has going on, but green just sticks out to me
It´s still a really nice look and since the rest of your upload is simply outstanding, gold overall!
2017-06-04 5:59

wipalmi032
Fashion Guru
I'm with elessar the green doesn't fits but I love how you use the ice there
2017-06-05 1:20