Vengeful Spirit

By RandomWolf on August 20th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Medium
Color: Black
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Project idea:
I decided that I'm going to upload my characters and their current looks into this site. I would like to hear out your opinion regarding them. I've also taken the liberty of editing the screenshots to make them more appealing since my laptop isn't that great.

About the character:
She is called Deadly Amber. Amber doesn't have a surname. She never got one, so she doesn't see the need of having one. Amber grew up alone on the streets and had no friends. Life was rough and she had to live by with scraps and as a beggar. Some of the priests attempted to bring her to the Orphanage but she always avoided them at all costs, fearing for rejection.

One day, as a young teenager, Amber noticed an adventurer in the market and wanted to pickpocket him. She was caught and right when she was expecting a severe reaction from the man, he showed her something she hadn't seen in a very long time: kindness. He 'adopted' her and became her parental figure. She trained with the man and they were like a family.

However, he did not cease of his adventures and had to departure for a short time. He never came back. Amber was furious and sought vengeance. She was restless.. and years later she realised that this was not what her 'father' would have wanted for her. Amber decided to change the course that her life was heading to. She began to help people. She worked for the Order of Whispers for a time and then moved on to the Pact. After the Pact's failure, Amber returned to the Reach.


Comments


KestrelGirl
Fashionista
Screens? Love 'em. Story? Nice (a few grammar thingies but unusually, I don't really care). Armor combo? Mostly T2/T3 cultural. C'mon, you can do better! I'd throw in some Krytan or Magitech armor, if you've bought either of those (I think Krytan rotated out for a couple months, but Magitech has not yet). You have Heritage armor too - I imagine the top from that would be infinitely more practical than the underboob bikini you have right now. A little better for blending in, especially for a rogue like Amber.

I really do want to see your stellar screens of V2 of this look!
2016-08-21 3:52

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
Your presentation again is really amazing, but I´d have to say that this is one of the most unoriginal armour mixes in game by now, I just saw it way too often to be convinced by it anymore
It certainly doesn´t look bad (although highly impractical :p) and I appreciate that you still mixed a little and used some very convincing dyes, but it is the human underboob meta after all
2016-08-21 5:12

Fylah
Trendspotter
Although I love the underboob armor, for obvious reasons, it really is very overdone and unoriginal. It looks good but we've all seen it before. Then again, medium armor has few girly skins that I'd class as being pretty. You've got some awesome screenies here though. :)
2016-08-21 5:54

Eremite
Fashionista
how did you not get gold? I love the dyes and style. except perhaps for the shoulders. but still, the screens are breathtaking. a gold!
2016-08-21 10:41

RandomWolf
Trendspotter
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2016-08-21 12:55

Veranis
Wanderer
Armor parts and dyes fits fine , story seems quite good same goes for screenshots.
2016-08-21 13:05

RandomWolf
Trendspotter
I understand that the chest piece is overused due to its revealing nature. Amber was my very first level 80 character and I always found that chest piece nice.

It's not the best look out there, but I do like it. I am glad that the dyes and the screenshots turned out okay though!
2016-08-21 15:09

Inverse93
Stylist
I rarely see females with short hair like this anymore - it's refreshing to see one, especially when they're a good-looking and interesting character to boot!
2016-08-21 16:18