|Silver from me.|
You have good sense of shape and geometry to your character and a good (albeit not yet great) sense when it comes to making screenshots. These are your strengths. Using Dominion Tribune Mannica to offset your missing shoulders was a great idea, especially when their massive, thick design is in harmony with jagged, rough and macho style of the chestpiece.
Where you're lacking of your sense of colors. You stuck to roughly just two (least at first glance) very gaudy and not neccesairly complimenting colors. These generally erase any deeper intricacy to your look, giving off a boring experience until external factors (infusions, skill effects, landscape) come into play.