Without light there is no shadow

By ShuffleMyFeet on December 31st, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Light
Color: Gold
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This is my Elementalist Johan ErdengrĂ¼n.

He was always a cheery person and loved to explore the whole world on his own.

But one day he came in contact with a secrect organisation which works in the darkest and deepest places in the underground of Auric Basin. They believe in a flame in each indiviual which creates a piece of the darkness the world is falling into. Caught by their believes, Johan starts to see his surrounding more and more negative and due to this stress, his hair turned into a pure white tone.
Now under their control, Johan is forced to hide his indiviuality from everybody, covering almost his whole face and wearing the colors of the organisation: Gold representing the flame and black the darkness.
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Hi everybody, I followed this website for a while and now finally convinced myself to hand in a personal look :D

Please tell me honestly what you think about it and I am always open for suggestions ^-^
(Ps: Sorry for my english, I am not a native speaker, so please excuse the mistakes I might make ^^')


Comments


RASCALLON
Fashion Collector
Hello, most definitely get rid of that mask and replace it with something different. I don't want to speak for everyone, but that kind of mask is NEVER used by veterans--I highly recommend Warbeast Cowl, though. You can always say he was given a promotion and that Cowl comes with it.
Anyway, I feel like something beside the mask fixing, is still missing. A SHINY! I know you might not be a hardcore freak that spits thousands of gold just for skins, but as a suggestion, get a weapon or backpack that make up for it. You need to treat your character some super epic things (1 is totally enough but it must fit the "Lore" of your character, and MAINLY his looks, because he surely would like something Gold and Fiery instead of Cold and Freezing - you feel me? ^^)!

Sorry for a lengthy comment, but I really felt I needed to get it out.
So yeah, cheers mate,
and Happy New Year!
2018-01-01 3:40

ShuffleMyFeet
Wanderer
I get what you are saying and I agree.
Definitly going to try out Warbeast Cowl, don't have it acually but it looks good as far as I saw it on pictures!
Thanks for the suggestion ! ^^
2018-01-01 15:05