Silent Predator
By mihana on March 26th, 2017 |
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Silent Rose
An old, lonely and misunderstood spirit, who wanders on this world since a long time ago...
She was known at her hometown as an extraordinary beautiful geisha, who every man loved and every little girl wanted to be like.
However, Silent Rose was killed by an unknown man, who disappeared through the night.
But the man would have never thought that he could see her ever again.
At first she just chased him in his dreams, but after a while he started seeing her in the dark and in mirrors.
She wanted to take revenge, and succeded. The man was found shortly afterwards in an old house in the woods.
Pierced with an golden arrow through his heart.
Since this day, the spirit of Silent Rose still travels on this world and protects everybody who gets threatend or almost killed by somebody.
She wears her red scarf so her enemies are not able to see when she bleads.
Even if she is a ghost, her wounds are still open.
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Hey Guys and thank you for clicking on my profil.
This is my first charakter here and i hope I will get nice feedback of you
Comments
 Katushka Fashion Guru | Hello, I like your story, though I must say it doesn't fit so much to your character's apperance. I would expect something that would make her look like a ghost (e.g. shining eyes, unnaturally pale skin, infusion) or at least some mark (scars) that would indicate she was seriously wounded. Although when I'm looking closely at the pictures, she might have red-colored eyes, but it's not very visible unfotunately. About the armor mix you chose, wreath usually seems out of place to me, there is very few cases when I like it. Also I'd probably choose different gloves, because these are very detailed unlike the rest od the armor. It's nice that even when it's your first post, you added several screenshots and a story about your character, not everyone does that. So keep it up :) |
| 2017-03-27 13:45 | |
 XynKe Fashion Collector | agreed, I would suggest using bloodstone visage as a replacement for the wreath [&AgHPNQEA] |
| 2017-03-29 1:31 in reply to Katushka | |
 Zech Stylist | love the color, love the armor combi. gold for u |
| 2018-12-18 9:22 |
