It looks like this look has potential, but it's really hard to tell with one screenshot that doesn't give you a good idea of how the look comes together. Putting in your armor skins and dyes would really help this look, too. I'm sorry, right now I can't give it more than a bronze, but I'd love to see an improvement of this look's presentation to be able to really judge it.
Actually, now that I look at this, it seems to be only an outfit. Try transmuting your armor to give it a unique look! This site really only focuses on armor, so the odds of you getting a favorable review by putting an outfit on are slim....