|I'd change green dye on your shoes to something else , since these are metal parts it seems, so it doesn't go well with bright green :). Other than this, I like how rough it looks.|
|Agree on the green on the shoes--don't be afraid to make clothes look like, well, clothes. You don't need to splash the color on every piece.|
The green is a bit bright, in my opinion. There's a bright yellow green on your back and a dull faded green in tatters--go for one of them.
I like how you pull the bones on different pieces together. The daggers, though, seem out of place. If you have them, the Centurion's Claw might work. Elsewise, I'd have to look through what daggers are around to make a better suggestion.