|Of all your presentations, I like this one the best. I don't know much about asura armor, but at first glance it looks coherent and harmonious. |
Two points of criticism, regarding your pictures and description. The latter is not present at all - maybe write a few words why you chose such look for this character, etc. And screens feel its purpose, but looks a bit boring. You could make some emotes, use skills and maybe choose nicer environment (also zoom your character a bit closer!). And because of these points I don't give you a rating (that wouldn't be very good, although for armor and colors you would have earned gold).
|Wow, what a beautiful asura, I loved the armor and I loved the colors, and I honestly loved the chosen environment, because they didn't steal the scene and the focus remained on your character, just beautiful * - *|