As i play S/P on her i didnt want a sneaky look on her, but rather that of a proud soldier in the first line of the 17th century/steampunk. Thats also why she has Bonetties Rapier ;)
Everythings is Magitech except leggings. Those are T2 cultural
The wraps on the leggings seem a bit out of place, but I think that's one of the few miniskirt options for medium armor norns. Duelist pants might look good. Overall, I like it. The theme comes across very well.
Cool choice of armor, and I love the steampunk look! The tattoos really throw it off though - they don't really mesh with the theme, and using a few varying shades of red/red-ish brown would really help and break up the monotone red you've got going on. Over all, great job!