|If you would use the zoom function, the screens would be nicer! As for the armor mix - I think you haven't played since 2014 (even Shattered Bloodstone Circlet after 3 years isn't really something new). Since there is nothing original to see here, your presentation is boring.|
|Everything doesn't have to be new to look good, I don't use only new armor on my characters cause man that would be seriously boring, you got all these skins, you use them doesn't matter how old or new they are, and as to zoom function it's been used a lot, but getting cam angles aint always easy with them as you should know if you actually use them yourself. You can critisise and have your opinion, but I'm happy with the result even if it's "old"|
|I've seen 6 of your presentations and haven't found a single screen where you've used zoom... ( The images are either cropped = poorer image quality or your character is very far away = small)|
|I really like this! I've been trying to find a way to use the masquerade skirt without it looking out of place or cliche and I think you did it really well. The crown looks really nice too, very shiny and fits your character and look perfectly.|
My only crits are really more personal preference and I'm no expert so take them with a grain of salt:
-This would look GREAT with permafrost on some of the smaller bits to dye, not the large parts of the outffit but the trim. Of course permafrost is kind of a pipe dream for me so unless you already have it... lol
-The shoulders could be mildly more interesting but I do like the ones you have-- I can't think of any off the top off my head but something with a little more flair, some more... sticky-outy bits? You know what I mean. I do like the little gem/medallion thing in the center of those though so I'm torn on that.
-The little silver bit of the masquerade skirt looks mildly out of place because of it's color not matching the metal of the crown. Not sure if that's something you can dye or not but the fact that it's metal (or I think it is?) and not shiny, but very matte, throws me off a tiny bit.
As for screens, maybe try using some emotes/poses? I'm still learning myself, but it would be cool to see some different actions happening. Also a bit more description would be nice, some backstory-- why is she the queen of ice? What does she do, what's her personality like?
All in all I really really like it. I'm jealous I didn't think of it first. Great job