Machined Revenant

By Dorky on April 10th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Multi
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This is Amos Dorkington, he first started out with using double sword, but he was so clever he poked his eye out with one of the swords and decided to go with shield instead. Now with one eye shorter and steaming shield and sword he is ready to go again!

I tried making his colorscheme fitting with the machined weps and this is the result, hope you like it! (Yes the eyepatch glitches, very annoying).


Comments


frederickx
Fashionista
I like the look overall, but the low screenshot quality detracts from it =(
2016-04-10 19:45

Roamin
Fashion Guru
It looks like you've been cropping your images to make closeups, this can result in poor resolution screenshots. I'd recommend you to crop as little as possible, and instead use the Field of View option to zoom a bit closer to your character :)
I think a little more work could be done with the colors, the gray on the metal parts are very matte, and doesn't really look much like metal, ofc I don't know what kind of budget you have, but maybe investing in some of the bit more expensive dyes could do a lot.
the Hair color also seems a bit off, the slight blue shade from Midnight Ice saves it a little though.
The armor combo itself works really well, and i think this look has good potential :)
2016-04-11 10:28