|I like the look overall, but the low screenshot quality detracts from it =(|
|It looks like you've been cropping your images to make closeups, this can result in poor resolution screenshots. I'd recommend you to crop as little as possible, and instead use the Field of View option to zoom a bit closer to your character :)|
I think a little more work could be done with the colors, the gray on the metal parts are very matte, and doesn't really look much like metal, ofc I don't know what kind of budget you have, but maybe investing in some of the bit more expensive dyes could do a lot.
the Hair color also seems a bit off, the slight blue shade from Midnight Ice saves it a little though.
The armor combo itself works really well, and i think this look has good potential :)