Cosmic Valkyrie

By Unicorns on September 29th, 2018
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Blue
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NOTE: I WOULD LIKE INPUT, PLEASE DON'T JUST TOSS A VOTE ON IT AND MOVE ON. IF YOU VOTE SILVER GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS ON WHAT I COULD CHANGE TO IMPROVE THIS. THANKS =)

I know the Zodiac armor is a love/hate kind of skin, but I've been trying to make it work. Plus I wanted a decent Heavy armor sort of look while playing a light armor class and this is what i've got so far. I'll take more screens later when it's not so late and I don't have work in the morning.

Also feel free to help me out with a less turd name than the one I randomly threw in there.


Comments


Roadredfashiowar
Trendspotter
Hey I really like the look! The colors look good together and armor mix too. What you really lack is better screenshots and a description/story for your look =) If you improve those you can get gold easily
2018-09-30 7:08

Unicorns
Stylist
Thanks for the feedback and the compliment! I'll definietly work on the story/description and upload more screens when I get home from work tonight! I was in a bit of a rush to at least get this uploaded onto here last night.
2018-09-30 8:45

Roamin
Fashion Guru
Zodiac is very difficult to work with without having it stand out too much.
I tried to do it once, and ended up having to cover every inch of my character in order to make it work.
You have managed to make the transition between zodiac and skin seem more natural than i ever could, so gj on that!
If you can just find the correct setting to take some killer screenshots and put some work into the description, that's often enough to carry a post to gold. I would actually say that about 60% of the post can be done through presentation alone (Description, Screenshots and Originality).
2018-09-30 11:18

Unicorns
Stylist
I think the most unfortunate things about Zodiac are how atrocious the helm that comes with it (gives you that weird derp face) and that the armor part of it actually looks really good IMO, but you're stuck with the glowy blue part over your characters whole body. Yeah I'm not too hot at taking good screen shots but I'll definitely work at it and see if I can't find some good locations and poses to take some solid Screen shots. I do appreciate the feedback, so thank you!
2018-09-30 13:18

Roamin
Fashion Guru
Once you've found a good spot, play around with the camera settings.
I often turn Field of view very very far down to get much closer to my character so you can really get to see the details in there.
It's also usually a good idea to avoid having your character dead center (Rule of thirds and all that). And try to get as much of the character in view as possible :)
Lastly, try to make sure the background isn't too cluttered, and allows the details in your armor to stand out.
Good luck! ^^
2018-09-30 16:57 in reply to Unicorns