Brutally honest, it's not looking great.
You've gone with all Carapace and a Primeval Helmet, so not much variety in the armor department.
The colors are extremely bland, only emphasized by the effect you've got running on your bar there...
Screenshots leave much to be desired as well (hide your UI with the ctrl+shift+H key combination for starters).
And let's be honest, there's a huge amount of players who run around using the complete Carapace Set with merely a different headpiece, so I can't really give points for originality either...
So yeah, sorry... it's just not good in any department, in my opinion...
Using a single color makes it look bland. I would add some additional colors to make it stand out more. Perhaps greens, browns, or oranges to go with the yellow.
Need to turn off your HUD, also if you want to do monocolor you need to do different shades. Darker golds, some orange even, etc. Otherwise it looks like a slab and kind of meh.