Para Xylene

By Cotser101 on September 11th, 2017
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Black
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p-Xylene (para-xylene) is an aromatic hydrocarbon. It is one of the three isomers of dimethylbenzene known collectively as xylenes. The p- stands for para-, indicating that the two methyl groups in p-xylene occupy the diametrically opposite substituent positions 1 and 4. All xylene isomers are highly flammable.
Main hazards: Flammable liquid and vapor.


Faye Grimm
Hi! It's a nice idea with the chemistry in the style, but I don't know what you need help for? I don't know enough about chemistry and the like, a litte more explanation or why you chose the fire look could help. explain it for dummies like me ^^. Especially because not everyone is native english speaker then professional jargon is harder to understand.

First impression is a nice look, but without knowing more or what you need help with I can't say anymore.
2017-09-12 7:05

Fashion Collector
Some varied screenshot locations would be nice to show off the dye and details. Overall, good pyromancer look. What exactly do you think you need on for this look?
2017-09-12 13:06

Fashion Collector
This is a good start, for sure.

The obvious way to help would be to encourage you to play with the camera settings so you can create more dynamic, interesting, and focused screenshots.

Beyond that, play with different shades of color so that the pieces aren't all the same. You may find that making some oranges more earthy and others more vibrant will add to the visual interest of the outfit.

Like the others pointed out, though, it would help a lot if you talked about what you wanted help with specifically.
2017-09-12 17:35