|Wow, this is fking awesome. Good job, ieva :)|
|Ok, I am unimaginative about any kind of narration. Your story is not funny, not interesting, not poetic and doesn't tell me anything . The screens are ok, but due to all the side effects (infusions, jewelry) there are no details to be seen, although the armor mix by itself I find quite nice. Unfortunately this is not more than silver. |
I wonder if you can guess what I mean. Let me tell you that I cut a fragment about a minotaur and weapons glowing.
|I don't know what narrative you expect and why. How I answered (on another comment from you) - I don't understand what you want and who (or what) caused your problems.|
|Oh my, ignore that person. your work is amazing, for some reason I can't vote but this is obviously very bright gold!|