|Im not a fan of the wings here and the red stripes on the chest drive me crazy o.o|
If they cant be dyed i wouldve chosen a different piece, i couldnt live with this xD
I also dont really like the 2-colour dye-scheme here. You might be too focused on the ice-theme and thus fall a bit flat on originality.
However your presentation is very good! The screen where hes facing the ice-elemental looks awesome and the one where you show the clash with your fire look is also nice :D
I would give you the tip to pay more attention to your background when taking screens. While your posing is really good, the backgrounds on some screens look a bit boring, partly due to the angle you shot the screen from.
Overall a nice upload, solid Silver from me :)
|Thank you for the suggestion XD. Yeah i know about that red stripe that cant be dyed, but the reason i kept with it was because Legion Hauberk doesnt sit sttaight up flat on top of the chest like most of the armor in GW2. Instead, it gives a bulk to the chest to go along woth the big shoulder pad. I trjed out different armors from my limited wardrobe a couple times, but i couldnt find anything better. Imma have to go skin hunting and hopefully i find a better option.|
And for the screenshots, at least it feels better than my first attemlt, so I'll get there :)
|I dig the overall look. Looks really monstrous!|
Maybe try additional blue dyes on some parts of your armor. Dyes sometimes act differently depending on the armor piece.
|Thank you :) |
I HAVE been currently trying out additional dye colors and what-not, and it does make the character seem more vibrant. But either way, this post is staying as is, because I'm kind of worn out from taking screenshots to edit this post XD
|This is awesome!|
Im in love with his story! so much time and detail went into that and it shows!
The overall look is great too. The dye choices I would never have thought of either. The originality shows here, details and thought you have put into this shows. Im in love with the screenie you have with him and that drake too XD
|Thanks a lot :D yeah the drake picture. I was trying to lure in a couple more to get a shot with multiple drakes coming at me, but they never made it as easy as i felt it would... so i had to compensate for just one XD.|
The lore was literally a 3 page short story before i compressed it down. I feel like i never had so much fun "playing" gw2 as i did brainstorming and writing the lore.
This was technically my latest skin design in-game and i absolutely love it. I wanted to make this as good as i could in my perspective. Though it didnt get as much vote as i hoped, but oh well :)
|Have to agree with PhoenixStorm, that Drake picture is probably my favorite. But overall I really like how they really look like an Corrupted Icebrood|