|The poly-luminescent effect looks awesome! I wouldn't like the armor dyes or combination without it, but I assume you dyed it too look good with the infusion, so job well done. |
The screens aren't bad, you'll get better in time (speaking from my own experience :)
Some "action" screens and some in neutral light - that's the base (imo).
So overall I'd say it's very nice post considering it's you're first. You deserve gold.
|ah thank you! :) I've seen your Zodiac sylvari a few weeks back and I loved it, btw. |
Yes the armor dye was so that it brings out the red without becoming a little TOO overwhelming from the Poly-luminescent effect.
Wow, I totally disregarded taking a few screenshots under a neutral light, for sure, and I'd never have caught that problem! I appreciate the advice.
|Considering this is your first upload, super well done!|
The armour is a little over the top, but at least it´s consistently over the top :P
Together with the refractor the dyes really look quite cool (especially like his flamy hair!)
The screens could still use a little work, but I definitely like the direction you are going in and it´s obvious that you are really trying to present smth well made here!
My suggestions for screens would be to utilize the camera options (Field of View, Horizontal/Vertical Position) a little more and try to also take some screens in a less overbrudening light
But overall this is a cool Charr look and very impressive for your first upload, gold from me :3
|thank you for the tip! :) I've been trying out some screenshots by myself yesterday and I guess I'm going back for a second round today using different options for the camera, then.|
|Following my answer, I had a look at your entry ! Funny we both ended up doing flame-themed Charrs, even though we went in different directions.|
I love the effort you out into your lore writing, and the overall mix is really nicely done. While the character menu screens doesn't really do it justice, the style goes to an entirely new level with the Poly-luminescent effect. It just hightlights perfectly the "blazing" aspects a Flame Legion Charr ! Gold for me :D
|Thank you! The lore was really the hardest part about making this in the end... more because I couldn't figure out how to shorten up my story any smaller than a whole page or two... (And I've been having trouble with the second one, even more so than this one!) Hopefully I've typed it up good enough for me to deliver what kind of story and concept this lore was supposed to set.|
|Wow, getting so read both sides of the story makes me want to vote for them both instead of picking a side XD |
He totally looks like the bad ass brother, who doesnt take crap no more. I'd love to see a lot more screenies of this dude!
|I am working on his armor choices a bit here and there to look a bit more apart from his brother :) once i do and i feel the time is right (wont be any time soon, since i have other skins i wanna feature firstto receive some feedbacks before uploading ver.2's), i promise this guy will be back with better screenshots and everything X)|