Magnir Odinson

By Alexis59 on June 14th, 2017
Race: Norn
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Red
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My warrior, Magnir Odinson


Comments


Katushka
Fashion Guru
Hello. I see you like fullsets :) That is ok of course, but you probably won't get high votes on this web, as fullsets are usually seen as one of the biggest evils :D

It facinates me, how you even copied the colors used on icons of the armor pieces :D That is some dedication :) But unfortunately you're stressing the unoriginality even more.

If you're interested in any advices from me, I'd recommend to try mixing more different sets, add more screens to your post from different places. You can even try to capture some poses while using combat skills. That usually looks good.

Sorry I don't speak french much, hope you understand english.
2017-06-14 16:31

Hylek
Fashionista
Looks like someone did a lot of Hotw.
Presenting one full armor-set is like presenting an outfit. Sure it looks great and consistant, but its suuuuuper unoriginal.
The colour-scheme isnt very exciting either, it doesnt even match the weapon-set.
Your screens are ok, but nothing that can save the lack of originality here :/

Also you might want to write your description in english, since this is a multicultural website.
2017-06-15 10:49

Luna_Yggdrasilson
Stylist
I don't know if you understand/speak English so I will do it in French (sorry for the others)

J'aime beaucoup l'idée bien que le mix soit commun. Mais justement je trouve que ça fait pas de mal de revenir sur du basique par moments. Ta présentation démarre bien mais ça fait résumé, je suis sûr que tu peux l'étoffer un peu, tout personnage a droit à son histoire. Essai également de la traduire en anglais, si tu as du mal fais toi aider via internet et d'autres joueurs ;)
2017-06-16 9:51