|Armour is sadly not too exciting since it's almost one armourset which is a little bit boring imo.|
I like the weapon you used and I see that you tried to create a dye scheme that would be fitting and I think the dyes are in general not bad but it's bothering me that the bottom leg part has a different shade to it that looks very off to me. The purple dye in general is kinda disconnecting here and I think you could find a different colour that would fit so much better.
Screens are not bad, you could try to play with the camera settings a bit more though sometimes your character looks a bit too far away and with the right settings this wouldn't be a problem anymore. Also try some close ups, action- shots and find some more fitting locations that would reflect your armour and theme a little bit better.
Other than that the presentation is really nice but the look itself is sadly not too interesting and I would love to see some different pieces here I am sure you would be able to find something pretty and fitting ^^