|The dyes are really nice, I like the dark brown you brought in here and the blues go perfectly with the mask|
The armour combination is nothing too unique, but it works I´d say, even though I would prefer not using legs and coat from the same set
Your screens are really really good!
I see that you put a lot of effort into your little background stories, which is great, they could just need a little proof reading first; English is probably not your native tongue and it is awesome that you don´t let that keep you from publishing your little stories, just a little grammar check here and there would make it more rounded!
Next time I try to work on my English :).
Cultural chest and legs was a best in my way to this story.
I have to tell you that hate when armor part texture together. It's a reason why I use not special armor part.