|not sure how i like that Headpiece for a pirate look.|
colors are great! the Charred dye really gives it a nice dirty/rusty look.
screenshots are decent. but the 3rd last, is a bit far away, and i don't really get anything to support your look from it.
you can also try to offset the camera a little, to make the screenshots a little more interresting (rule of thirds and all that stuff) but that's a minor detail :)
Overall well done in my opinion :)