Nice and simple. You pretty much pulled off the "form over function" part; I can tell the charr's trying to be sexy (probably that exposed chest armor of his), while having that junk-rat vibe from the armor and dye choices.
I felt bad for digging into your other outfit, so I wanted to express my appreciation for this one!
I really like how this simultaneously feels like it fits in perfectly with the setting of the Black Citadel forges along the other NPCs, but is still unique enough to feel personal. That can be tough to pull off.
You didn't double up on any armor pieces, and yet they have great unity together. The body pieces are pretty simple, and the gloves/boots have a bit more intricate design-- it layers together beautifully.