|I think this character could look really great, but you definitely need to work on presentation!|
Specifying armour and dyes is a bare minimum, just as giving some more screens to flesh out the upload
Right now I don´t even know what boots your Charr is wearing, since I can´t even see them :/
Since this is your first upload, it is understandable that you don´t quite know about all the site´s features yet, but better get accustomed to them before it rains bronze on you
Screens and description are two parts of the rating and since you didn´t really deliver either it would be hard to judge you well
The one screen you used shows me that you at least understand camera postioning and such very well, so take some time for a few more screens and give us a nice upload!
I couldn´t rate this anything other than bronze right now, which would be a shame, so if you should rework this upload a little give me a notice and I will gladly give your Charr a higher vote ^^
|Hey, thanks for your comment! I think my presentation is ready now! :D|
|That already looks way better! ^^|
I´d still advise you to take a few more ingame and action screens, but you are definitely on the right path now!
Happy styling :3
|Love ur style and I like the description!|