Ley line hunter
By Cronach on November 14th, 2016 |
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Cronäch is an old sylvari, similar to a soundless he's become a mercenary.
During one of is mission he's need to found an artifact in the ruins of rata novus. The position of the artifact was close to a generator of lye line, but not knowing that is approached too close and suddenly a load explosion of lye line came and hurt him directly.
The lye line force merged with is body, he's color changing some wood part of him became rock with lye line emerging of it.
But, is survive to this and after recover all of is ability's, he's continue to live like a mercenary and with he's new body, theyr client and prey named him ; the lye line hunter.
Hey guys!
Okay first of all i'm so sorry for my english i'm not speak it and write it perfectly but i hope you're all understand me!
This is my first work some better screenshot commes out later but it's difficult because of he's lye line armor who have different brightness all the time in all spot of tyria T_T and please if someone know how remove aegis because it's ruining screen with weapon out..
(If you have advice or ideas for me and make the mix and dye better tel me!)
Comments
 Blackkarmy Fashion Collector | I like the concept, it looks really cool and unlike most sylvari I see with super saturated dyes. That said, I really like the subtle color scheme, it's not a fancy glowy color explosion, like I see on a lot of sylvari, yet it looks really good! Not sure but the shoulders seems a little bright compared to the rest, maybe a tick darker would be better there(?) The mix of leaf and stone armor looks really cool, sometimes because of the material it looks fairly different and not fitting while at other times it looks like one set, really like it! Looking forwarf to story and screens, then. |
| 2016-11-14 11:08 | |
 Hylek Fashionista | So ... if you plan on adding a story and screens anyway, why upload it already? People will just give you worse votes since you have a worse presentation compared to when you actually upload your story and additional screens. My tip would just be to prepare everything beforehand (description, screens etc.) and upload it when the look is complete! Id say 90% of the people wont come back to see if you updated your look and change their vote ... maybe keep that in mind ;) I do like the concept and what you were going for. Though i feel like the shoulders feel a little detached. Maybe you can find another hue which ties in that armor-piece a bit better. A more greenish dye should be it i think. The leyline weapons will look great here, im looking forward to see the final result and i will hold back my vote until then. Just reply to my comment when you are finished :) |
| 2016-11-14 13:43 | |
 Cronach Stylist | Thank you very much! For the brightness of the shoulder i now :/ the texture is absolutely not the same of the rest of the armor i continue to search better dye for it ^^! |
| 2016-11-14 19:37 in reply to Blackkarmy | |
Cronach Stylist | Thanks! yeah you right but it's been a while i want to post my ideas here and i've been impatient xD i put the story and some screen reference's but more screen comme out later i explaine too why i don't have theme for the moment in the description now :/ And for the shoulders they are nothing better who look like sylvari and do it less detached in my opinion :/ if you have ideas about it tel me :)! |
| 2016-11-14 19:54 in reply to Hylek | |
 Refia Montes Trendspotter | Not gonna vote now, but it's a pretty good idea! Ancient looking and not super bright like other Sylvari. |
| 2016-11-14 21:17 | |
Cronach Stylist | Thanks :)! whaiting for screenshot xD? |
| 2016-11-15 7:56 in reply to Refia Montes | |
 Arilzu Wanderer | I thought for a moment it was my toon, I made one a few months ago with the same theme and a similar style ^^ http://i.imgur.com/xky5R9O.jpg |
| 2016-11-15 9:41 | |
Cronach Stylist | Oh effectively xD |
| 2016-11-15 9:52 in reply to Arilzu | |
yankeebos Wanderer | The idea is awesome! But the shoulders are not the same color in the screen? |
| 2016-11-15 11:45 | |
Cronach Stylist | Thanks :D! And yeah i know like i said in the description the shoulders and greaves bright differently in fonction of the light etc.. |
| 2016-11-15 12:16 in reply to yankeebos |