|I feel like the leystone glow and the fire dont go very well together. |
On top of that your colour-scheme does nothing to improve that. Its plain black with dark-red accents. The shadow dyes just erase all details of the armor and you look like a black blob with some shiny effects.
Also the goggle-headpiece feels out of place here. Its the only technical piece between these magical effects.
Your screens are nice, but there could be a lot more!
I might change my mind when you use other dyes than the ones shadow-kit. But this black blob doesnt feel very stylish at all.
Sorry for being harsh :S