Wandering Mesmer
By Atwuin on November 2nd, 2015 |
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This is my Elonan mesmer (his cultural background is Elonan not his outfit). After he was forced out of his home land he made the long trek to Divinity's reach. Along the way he picked up what ever he could to make his armour and weapons. Soon after reaching Divinity's reach however he decided it was not for him and so made his way towards the Silverwastes. Now we journeys between the jungle and his new desert home, trying to rebuild his life.
Comments
 goruu Wanderer | It looks nice, but nothing about it really looks Elonian to me. |
| 2015-11-02 13:37 | |
 Lorelilly Fashionista | I'm not too sure about the gloves or headpiece, but I like how the rest of the armor combinations work very well well together! |
| 2015-11-02 20:34 | |
 Hylek Fashionista | Love everything except the headpiece! Its colour clashes with that of the shoulders. Nice look overall tho! :) |
| 2015-11-02 21:31 | |
 Annette Langmar Fashion Guru | I disagree with the comment on the gloves, I think they are one of the strongest pieces in this look. I think the colours could use some work though. The styling of this look is very Kournan, so I would suggest some deep rusty reds, and oranges, with a bit of blue, maybe an ocean dye. The green just end up looking like dusty military wear. I understand you want to look like it was made from scrap your character found but 1. he's a mesmer so he should still be lookin slick (also loose the fire jewel you're betraying your class) and 2 the green just doesn't read as Elonian. I don't think I've ever seen that shade of green on anyone in Elona, even the poor. |
| 2015-11-04 10:33 | |
Annette Langmar Fashion Guru | First comment was getting a bit big so Im gonna finish on a new one. So to summarize, for me the strongest pieces are the leggings and the gloves. The top is okay? Its a bit odd having a giant piece of metal if you're making a trek through a desert to come to kryta? I dont really understand the shoulders in relation to the Elonian theme. They don't look bad with the combo, but I just don't see the connection? I'd really at least like to see you explore some new dye options and update us with some changes because I think the potential is here for a really good look that tells a story. It just needs a bit more work For now it's silver from me but ill be keeping an eye for changes |
| 2015-11-04 10:36 | |
 Atwuin Wanderer | I love the feedback but I'd like to add; He's a black man... He does not need to dress Elonan to be one. |
| 2015-11-04 12:06 | |
Annette Langmar Fashion Guru | Thats true but I wasn't discussing his heritage but rather the clothing, and relationship of the clothes to the story you want to tell |
| 2015-11-04 14:10 in reply to Atwuin | |
Annette Langmar Fashion Guru | oh I also want to add I really like the colour you used for the metal pieces |
| 2015-11-04 14:10 in reply to Atwuin | |
 ratfeast First Style Supporter | Very nice armor combo and good colors. Could you list his weapons. I know the database is behind; if you can't find it there, I just put it after the intro (in text box). |
| 2015-11-08 14:20 | |
chupa Stylist | I'm not completely sold on the shoulders but I do love the look of this |
| 2016-01-06 18:55 |
