Goddess of the Moon

By Luxtress on August 3rd, 2019
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Purple
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This is my first submission. :o
Decided to make a look based on the staff skin because it was so beautiful.
Then I wanted to add a pop of color so it wasn't just black and white. :)

- I also have the Ghostly Infusion effect on


Comments


Frans
Fashion Guru
I find your armor mix somewhat chaotic (thrown together). Chest part and pants from a set takes away all the tension. Snow shoulders don't really fit the metal parts, just like holographic wings and stone structure on gloves. The colors are quite ok, although I'm not a fan of purple hair and your "pop of color". I would also emphasize other armor details (metal details are dark on your breast/leg armor, vice versa on shoes...). The screens for the first try I find quite ok, but are not really advantageous for your character/armor.
2019-08-04 18:54

3andit
Stylist
There is too much going on, for my opinion.
If you would focus on your Staff or on your wings, and then harmonize your Dyes to one of them, it would fit much better. Because both of them are eyecatcher and cant change the color of them.
2019-08-05 10:37

Jestersan
Trendspotter
I like the idea, is great, just need a bit more of harmony. The armor choice is nice, is just the wings and the staff what i would change.
2019-08-06 18:41

Luxtress
Wanderer
Thanks for the feedback :)
2019-08-10 13:40

GlassGuts
Wanderer
I don't think it's terribly busy, though I'd maybe pick some diff boots.
I think you did a pretty good job of building an outfit around the staff. The pop of color is nice in my opinion, I like that you used a color adjacent to your character's hair, its a pleasant tie in.

If you ever want to revisit this might I recommend diff boots, no backpiece, and chaos gloves (though they are a gem item .. . my apologies)
2019-08-10 15:35

Mista Fashionista
Stylist
too much going on. the staff and wings are a contrast to each other. viewers don't know what to focus on. i think if you find a different backpiece and fix up the color scheme, it could look pretty interesting. not a completely broken look, just needs a few modifications.
2019-08-12 6:40

Odinson the 9th
Stylist
im a big fan of the moon, so theme-wise, very pleased.
could use some improvements though
2019-08-25 4:50