I'll be honest, the lighting is bad, the dark colours blend in with the background and only the upper portion of the avatar can be seen. You should also take pictures from multiple angles as to show everything, I noticed the same issue with your Valkyrie, while your human outfit has a better presentation.
I like the look but I do agree that it needs more screenshots and also more color. The dark reds blend in with the dark black and thus you don't really get any true distinction in the outfit.
I never liked the whisper leggings. They feel so outdated in texture and geometry. Honestly I would pick something that is able to meet with the top so it does not look like she tried to make a crop top out of a sweater. To echo the above, the colors are too dark. Try charcoal, silver lead, or regular ebony. You can try dusky, autumn, or cinnamon for the red.
