"There was an unknown dervish; a skillful and competent warrior since the primeval age in Elona. Though, it was not the entire history of him that he's known for, but it was his unbreakable will power that able to overcome any obstacle and that he never backed down."
"And now there's a rumor among the Elonian and Sunspears. An awakended fighting another awakendeds. A one man, an undead that brought down and weakened many of Joko's army. We were too afraid to approach him and every time he finishing his job- he would just vanish."
"To think someone that could resist Joko's power and his action really indicates that we're have the same goal. Find him, he would be a very good ally to us."
"Yes sir, Commander."
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Hey, how is it going everyone. Here's another Head+Chest vampiric vabbian combo. This is my first time giving some backstory to my character(fashion). I hope the story is not too bad and lore-breaking. Also, English is not my first language and neither I'm good with constructing a good story.
This is intriguing af. Love it. The subtlety soaring from your pictures could be seen and felt. There is no immersion breaking thing that would make me say: "Why?" There is also no Legendary which is refreshing to say the least. It seems like you understand the play with different pieces and dyes.
The places you chose to take your pictures at are also very good picks, my favourite is 5th picture (the one where your Character stands in a sort of entrance high up in the skies), maybe because the architecture--it creates that feeling of being utterly small making your character big and godly.
Anyway, everything is as it should be, your story has some grammar flaws but that doesn't play a role if it serves as an background to better understand what you were going for. You made me like the Sunspear Scythe! So yeah... Take it. TAKE THIS GOLD AND GET OUT YOU SCYTHE WIELDING BADASS.