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Mihrean Fashion Guru | Okay, at the moment this is a low vote from me for several reasons: Sylvari Cultural is very commonly used. You need to present some amazing screenshots for me to rate it highly. Basically, you have lots of competition! Whilst I like how you've blended the wings with the dyes, I don't really feel that they fit with the theme. Maybe if you added some electric/robotic pieces in with the plant armour you could make it more cohesive. |
2017-06-22 4:58 | |
Katushka Fashion Guru | I agree with Mihrean here. I don't say your armor looks bad - it doesn't. But I've seen this so many times and your choice of coloring (which also doesn't look bad) doesn't make your look stand out. In cases like this nice screens could save it, but yours are very few and not so much artistic imo. And as already said, those wings do not fit the armor style. So the main advice is: the more screens the better :) Taking nice screens of the style you created and are proud of should be the best part of the process :D I hope we didn't scare you :) |
2017-06-22 6:46 | |
Psyjinx Stylist | Nope! Didn't scare me. I can take criticism well. I'll try to create something more unique. Thanks guys! |
2017-06-22 13:20 | |
Raha Fashion Collector | sylvari cultural armor is really difficult to work with because there are so few pieces, so it can be hard making something unique (i actually have this same armor combo on my sylvari.) but, i really like your color scheme! more screens would definitely be helpful for presentation! |
2017-06-22 13:56 | |
Mihrean Fashion Guru | Glad we haven't discouraged you :) I'd hate to scare someone away from this site as I find it a lot of fun. Honestly, just a few subtle changes and better presentation can go a LONG way. |
2017-06-22 14:02 in reply to Psyjinx | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | I can only echo what the rest already said: the armour and dyes really don´t look bad at all, they are fine, they just miss the certain "oomph" to really make it stand out on a fashion site Presentation alone can go a long way and take a look from boring to at least well presented I don´t want to give you a low vote right now, if you want to improve it just wouldn´t be fair I´d advise you to get a little more ballsy with the mixing of dyes on Sylvari, crazy combinations can work here that wouldn´t anywhere else Brown/orange/yellow are all dyes that could really make this special I´d love to see what you are capable of, cause I bet it´s some nice stuff, so I am looking forward to your next upload! |
2017-06-22 14:44 | |
Im Jelqing Trendspotter | Pale tree swagger really you couldn't think of a more better name, childish. And 2 screenshots? Sorry but this is worse than bronze. |
2017-06-24 16:03 |