Keeper Of Sands
By Raalala on March 13th, 2017 |
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Time, time never held power over me. Time was mine to control and bend, to shape as I saw fit.
Gifted with an hourglass at age 7, I was fascinated by the structure. The glass and how it was shaped, the sand, so fine and pale. I would time tasks my mother gave me around the house, rushing to finish as much as possible before the last grain reached the bottom. I suspect she knew it would make me a very efficient child, I don't think she bargained for what would come next though...
I would move from room to room in seconds, the first time I was just as surprised as her, having to catch my breath, I stared at the hourglass in my hand, its inscriptions glowing faintly, a tint of purple. I'd have heard of people with this gift, famous for their ability to turn the hands of time. Using it to benefit the world.
I knew I had to learn more, I had to test my powers, see if it was inside of me or... if it was only when wielding the hourglass. The Durmand Priory could help me, accompanied by my mother, we set off in search of the nearest base and I guess you could say, that's where my story really begins...
My Chronomancer, Nylau! I love her armor mix but I'm considering swapping out the Zodiac boots for Dry Bones boots, since they would mesh well with the gloves. Thoughts?
Comments
 Elessar Taralom Fashionista | You did really well on the presentation, it goes to show that every upload profits a lot from good screens and a great description! I do feel that the armour mix and dyes are a little off though; most of your armour feels a little more heavy and practical, which I quite like, but the bare chest doesn´t quite seem to fit in with the rest of the pieces Giving her something like the Seer Coat would fit much better here imo The dye job doesn´t feel really connected to the backpiece or armour; both of these have soft blues and light golds in them, so I think it would fit much better to use those colours than to go with a generic gold/white/black mix With a little more cohesion I would love to give this a gold, so if you should decide to change something, I´d gladly leave a higher vote! Btw I really think the Dry Bones Boots could work well, but only if you change the coat as well |
| 2017-03-15 14:29 | |
 Jabari Trendspotter | nice armor combo, nice to se that there is not a combo that went all slut xD |
| 2017-03-22 5:12 |
