Guardian of the Shadows
By JonaGW2 on March 2nd, 2017 |
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I am Tarja Schattenwacht, Guardian of the Shadows. Protector of Tyria, Light in the Dark
(''Because the night is dark and full of terrors'' (c) Game of Thrones)!
To fight against the disorder in Tyria, I've choosen Entropy as my weapon!
Comments
 Elessar Taralom Fashionista | I think this character could look really great, but you definitely need to work on presentation! Specifying armour and dyes is a bare minimum, just as giving some more screens to flesh out the upload Right now I don´t even know what boots your Charr is wearing, since I can´t even see them :/ Since this is your first upload, it is understandable that you don´t quite know about all the site´s features yet, but better get accustomed to them before it rains bronze on you Screens and description are two parts of the rating and since you didn´t really deliver either it would be hard to judge you well The one screen you used shows me that you at least understand camera postioning and such very well, so take some time for a few more screens and give us a nice upload! I couldn´t rate this anything other than bronze right now, which would be a shame, so if you should rework this upload a little give me a notice and I will gladly give your Charr a higher vote ^^ |
| 2017-03-03 5:21 | |
 JonaGW2 Wanderer | Hey, thanks for your comment! I think my presentation is ready now! :D |
| 2017-03-03 7:58 in reply to Elessar Taralom | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | That already looks way better! ^^ I´d still advise you to take a few more ingame and action screens, but you are definitely on the right path now! Happy styling :3 |
| 2017-03-03 8:01 in reply to JonaGW2 | |
 Astarte Wanderer | Love ur style and I like the description! |
| 2017-03-03 8:03 |
