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|sounds like someone didn't get anything but punches for christmas...|
|Anyway, good upload! And where did you get the helmet ? I have never seen anything like that :O|
|This is quite original, I like it!|
The armour and dyes are spot on and you even took the effort to tie everything together so well with your little story! ^^
I definitely get a swamp vibe from her and your overall upload is solid
For screen I would advise you to look for multiple different screening locations (a swamp would have been nice here as well) and maybe also play a little more with the camera options like Field of View and Horizontal/Vertical Position
Overall this is still a gold for me though ^^
|The helmet came out with the Living Story season 2 at one point, when we were just being introduced to Mordremoth. It was in the gem store~|
|I have as much a right to upload here as you do.|
I was so caught up in trying to get Shevonni up that I forgot about the camera options. Not to mention Suyin.....
I should fix these today.
You're right about the swamp thing, too. Khethal, her father, used to live in a swamp, but I didn't think to bring her back to the particular one he lived in in her story....
I'm glad you like it well enough though, even with my shortcomings on this. I'm going to reassess some things and try to come back stronger with the next one.
|So this is a broad comment for all of your recent looks. You have a really good eye for lighting in your screens. None are overly dark and you are always facing the light source. Your descriptive stories are lovely. I would suggest cranking up your graphics. If only for the shots, then bumping it back down when you need to move locations, and of of course utilizing your camera options. Combine that with a few more locations, a load screen pic, and a back shot or two is nice as well. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what you have in store!|
|Okay, I'll definitely come back to this comment for the next time to make sure I haven't missed anything.|
I did turn up the graphics more for this one, but I don't know if I have it up all the way or not. I might be thinking of "Sims 3" right now.
But anyway. Thank you for the pointers! I do need them, ha ha...
|I like it a lot. As mentioned in many comments here - my criticism only applies to your screens (your character is too small!) But you have my gold ;)|