Shevonni
By DigitalKathe on January 1st, 2017 |
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Shevonni is an enterprising young asura who joined the Pact when her swamp-dwelling father was killed by mysterious vines, later found to be tendrils belonging to Mordremoth. She was with the Pact Fleet when it launched, and miraculously survived, albeit badly injured. She luckily made it out to the Silverwastes, and then to Dry Top, to recover.
While going through these life-changing experiences, Shevonni adopted a new guise, shaping a helm from Modrem remains with her sylvari friend, and using the bones of exotic and dangerous creatures as armor and weapons.
She is now on her way back into the jungle with her spider, Saerlaith, and is more prepared than ever to avenge her father.
Comments
 Wonder Wabbit Wanderer | -- Comment has been removed -- |
| 2017-01-01 21:06 | |
 SteezSamurai Stylist | sounds like someone didn't get anything but punches for christmas... |
| 2017-01-01 23:57 in reply to | |
SteezSamurai Stylist | Anyway, good upload! And where did you get the helmet ? I have never seen anything like that :O |
| 2017-01-01 23:57 | |
 Elessar Taralom Fashionista | This is quite original, I like it! The armour and dyes are spot on and you even took the effort to tie everything together so well with your little story! ^^ I definitely get a swamp vibe from her and your overall upload is solid For screen I would advise you to look for multiple different screening locations (a swamp would have been nice here as well) and maybe also play a little more with the camera options like Field of View and Horizontal/Vertical Position Overall this is still a gold for me though ^^ |
| 2017-01-02 4:23 | |
 DigitalKathe Fashion Guru | The helmet came out with the Living Story season 2 at one point, when we were just being introduced to Mordremoth. It was in the gem store~ |
| 2017-01-02 9:27 in reply to SteezSamurai | |
DigitalKathe Fashion Guru | I have as much a right to upload here as you do. |
| 2017-01-02 9:29 in reply to | |
DigitalKathe Fashion Guru | Ah, shoot. I was so caught up in trying to get Shevonni up that I forgot about the camera options. Not to mention Suyin..... I should fix these today. You're right about the swamp thing, too. Khethal, her father, used to live in a swamp, but I didn't think to bring her back to the particular one he lived in in her story.... I'm glad you like it well enough though, even with my shortcomings on this. I'm going to reassess some things and try to come back stronger with the next one. |
| 2017-01-02 9:51 in reply to Elessar Taralom | |
 jesandsteven Fashion Guru | So this is a broad comment for all of your recent looks. You have a really good eye for lighting in your screens. None are overly dark and you are always facing the light source. Your descriptive stories are lovely. I would suggest cranking up your graphics. If only for the shots, then bumping it back down when you need to move locations, and of of course utilizing your camera options. Combine that with a few more locations, a load screen pic, and a back shot or two is nice as well. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what you have in store! |
| 2017-01-02 12:16 | |
DigitalKathe Fashion Guru | Okay, I'll definitely come back to this comment for the next time to make sure I haven't missed anything. I did turn up the graphics more for this one, but I don't know if I have it up all the way or not. I might be thinking of "Sims 3" right now. But anyway. Thank you for the pointers! I do need them, ha ha... |
| 2017-01-02 19:22 in reply to jesandsteven | |
 Frans Fashion Guru | I like it a lot. As mentioned in many comments here - my criticism only applies to your screens (your character is too small!) But you have my gold ;) |
| 2019-09-01 18:57 |
