Little Aleah, Asuran Golemaner

By SpecialK on August 13th, 2016
Race: Asura
Gender: Female
Armor: Medium
Color: Brown
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"The smallest and brainiest member of the team, standing only 3 feet tall, Aleah is a master Engineer and Golemancer. Aleah had an upbringing unlike most of her peers, one marred with tragedy and loneliness; her parents were killed in a laboratory accident, when a Golem undergoing a core transplant by her father and mother, went horribly wrong and exploded. Aleah, a baby at the time, was in the room, and only through her mother's attempt to shield her, Aleah survived, losing her left eye in the blast. Members of Aleah's-parent's Krewe took her in where she was raised amongst their own Progenies.

Aleah was always an outcast, her adopted siblings and the other Progenies set her apart from themselves- taunting her for her deformity and short stature, she gained the nickname 'Little Aleah'. However, amongst all the time she spent alone, reading and tinkering with her toys, Aleah began to discovered the gift she had received from her parents: she was exceedingly knowledgeable in the profession of Golemancy. At this moment in her life, she promised herself to become the best Golemancer she could be, to create Golems that were safe and that could be easily upgraded- in dedication and memory of her parents. Aleah's first project proved to be her personal favourite- at the age of 8, Aleah built her first Golem and her life long best friend: Big Tommi.

Aleah spent everyday with Tommi, her first friend and safe haven since her parents. Tommi accompanied Aleah through her time at the College of Dynamics, where Aleah designed and built Tommi a newer, sleeker casing- which he still wears to this day. Her knowledge of Golemancy increased exponentially, from which she built numerous Golems to help around the Rata Sum community, from Golems of janitorial roles to having a hand in the design of the Peacemaker Golems. Aleah held nothing back in her designs- the Krewe she was assigned to, amongst other Golemancy experts, by the Arcane Council is responsible for the safest, most efficient generation of Golems ever seen by Rata Sum.

Aleah still keeps her nickname 'Little Aleah' to this day in spite of the ties it had with her saddened past, as living proof to all Tyrians who see her prowess both in the lab and on the battlefield: that anyone, no matter how small their beginnings, is capable of achieving titanic feats."

I made this little gem before Taimi, I'll have you all know! I tried to make Aleah's armour aesthetic somewhat similar to the golems that are found round Tyria, with the use of grays, gold trimmings and the blue glow of power.


Comments


thunderstruck
Fashion Collector
cool asura look!
the earthen dye scheme really stands out for me, it makes her almost look like some kind of industrial, underground worker that has smth to do with the dredge
your screens could use a little more variety however, try to find different locations, poses and camera settings
2016-08-13 5:57

Krait
Wanderer
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2016-08-13 9:05

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
I really like the armour mix, shoulders included, as it gives a really industrial, mechanical feeling ^^
The dyes really add to this rusty feeling, I like it!
You could however still improve your screenshots
Great description though
2016-08-13 10:11

SpecialK
Trendspotter
Thanks for the compliments and advice guys, glad you like it. I added some more screenshots as requested.
2016-08-14 5:05

AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
This is such a cute and awesome Asura- look! I am really fond of your armour combo and I think it looks very neat and interesting.
The dyes are pretty amazing, as well. It's very natural and not too bright and yet you used a nice golden tone to create a nice outstanding statement which makes it a bit more interesting to look at.
The only thing I have to criticize are your screens. The places are pretty fitting that you used and I think that overall you get the idea how to take some nice screens but I would suggest you to learn a little bit more about the different camera settings in order to zoom a little bit more in so that we are able to see your character way better and her armour, right now she is mostly a little bit to far away.
But overall it's a very cool look and I really like your choices and your nice description!
2016-08-14 10:17

Garrius
Fashion Collector
Cute story , cute look with the dyes to match. I'm not too sure about the shoulders, not because they ruin the look or anything but rather I can't see it properly because of your screenshots. The only thing I can add to what everyone already told you about the screenshots is that field of view is your friend in order to show you Asuras fine details.
Still I'll give you Gold for this.

P.S: I think you gave me a Silver vote on my Charr instead of (I assume) Gold based on your kind comment. Would you mind checking that for me ? Or if you did mean Silver tell me what you didn't like so I know what to improve upon. I'd greatly appreciate it! :)
2016-08-15 13:50

donfrancisco
Trendspotter
I like the armor combination but I think the shoulders are a bit off but that's just my opinion.

I also like how excited she was when she saw the charr tanks. Lol so cute.
2016-08-17 1:07