White Angel of Death

By Ruuin on August 12th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: White
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what can I say? You can't get more un-necromancy then this lol. This is an oldie but a favourite of mine. It is blindingly bright and i just love it. Some of the pictures are a little older and since then the look has been updated because i got the chaos gloves and bifrost which i think pulls the look together really well. A bit about the toon, Melene is a human necromancer who despite her rbf is just out to help people. She comes off as serious and stoic but she has her moments.


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AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
I like unusual looks on classes that are mostly shown in the same manner in this case as dark and evil and- of course- greenish. Thinking out of the box is always a nice thing!
Unfortunately you didn't went further with your look. I really like that you wanted to create a bright and angelic look it's a pretty thing to do but sadly I don't see any creativity here. You didn't really take some effort by chosing skins of mostly one armour set which is boring imo. I think this is a beautiful armour set, that is out of question but on this site it's also about creativity and originality and you are delivering neither of that. You could use this very royal and nice looking bottom piece and try to combine it with another chestpiece. I know pretty well that it's possible to combine it with something else since I did it myself a couple of months ago. The phoenix chespiece for example is a match made in heaven.
There are a bunch of pretty boots, as well and I think what I don't understand the most is the scarf. It's very random and not fitting at all here and it's also a little bit weird imo to take such a thick and warm looking scarf when on the other hand she is pretty much half naked it just doesn't do you a favour.
The colours are also a little bit plain- you could have used some other very light shades and it would still look bright and beautiful and quite more interesting. A light silver tones for some details for example is a nice choice.
You said that some screens are already old and that you changed a bunch of stuff like the gloves and the weapon- well, why not logging in and taking some kick ass screens of your current look with all the new and matching pieces you achieved during your playtime? More screens are always welcome and especially more diverse screens like different and fitting locations, action screens, emotions, close up- shots you name it! Please, take a little bit more effort to your upload it would do your character a huge favour and we all would love to see more of your necro since it's an unusual theme that you were aiming here.
Some work on the armour, maybe a more exciting way of dyeing the different slots and some more screens and you are good to go and I am sure that it would even be gold worthy! Please don't take my comment as an insult I am trying to be very fair and objective and in comparison to other looks where people have spend more time creating their outfit it's just not as good as the others but I would love to see some changes because I am sure that you are able to do more. If you disagree then it's also perfectly fine but please respect the fact that from a objective point of view I simply can't give you gold for that.
2016-08-12 14:47

willr18
Stylist
This doesn't match. Why will you put the scarf if she's gonna be half naked
2016-08-12 14:47

Beanna
Fashion Guru
This is a very common and boring/meta look.
2016-08-12 18:41

wipalmi032
Fashion Guru
This is really boring and confusing why the scarf lol and no armor mix
2016-08-12 20:50

Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
I love how you can excactly see the difference between people willing to help and give advice and the ones who just come here to leave a mean spirited comment
The look does have its flaws with barely any mixing of armour, lacking originality and illogical things like the scarf, but at the bottom of it all is an attempt to create something that isn´t like every other necro and that´s a plus for me!
You could easily keep the very essence of this look and just build around for example the top so you get a little more original
Maybe try incorporating some more shades of blue or grey for some more variety in dyes as well
Don´t let spammers discourage you from getting a good looking character!
2016-08-13 10:39