Kyou

By xJuliette on August 11th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Medium
Color: Black
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Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
I really love the mix of armourpieces in the center of your character, top, legs and boots look very convincingly sexy to me!
Where the armour pieces went a little haywire to me are the shoulders, gloves and the bunny ears in particular
They are a bit outside your theme; maybe some simpler, more leather like pieces would go well here
As for the dyes: you wanted to go for a leather look and that you definitely achieved! The look would gain a little more detail and finesse however if you´d bring in some different shades at least
Maybe some dark brown or grey would make it look even more natural and convincing!
Overall still a nice upload, with a little tweaking here and there it could easily be gold for me! ^^
2016-08-11 13:57

AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
I am a huge fan of sleek looking- outfits and I think you really achieved that one especially with the top and bottom- combo. It creates a nice silhouette! Unfortunately I have to agree with Elessar that neither the shoulders nor the bunny ears are not too fitting or convincing. I think something not too bulky and big would fit way better and just leave the ears unless you are going for a bunny look xD
The colours are a little bit too plain it's a bit too black and I sadly can't see the details of every armour piece too well. Try some natural colours, maybe some brown tones since it would still give this look a leather vibe or keep the black but add another dye to it in order to get rid of the "black blobb".
Your screens are looking pretty nice but I would really love to see some different shots and actually some nice action shots. As a ranger you have a lot of weaponskills that would help you to create some unique and nice screens, just go all wild there is no such thing as too many screens!
I think this look has quite a lot of potential and I like the direction you were going for and with some minor changes about small armour pieces and the colours this look is good to go and would deserve gold!
2016-08-11 17:49

wipalmi032
Fashion Guru
All was really good till the bunny ears. Seriously?
2016-08-11 20:24

Hylek
Fashionista
I love the leather-suit look here!
This is one of the very few looks where i like the black dye-scheme, cuz it actually makes sense!
The boots look really badass and add some detail. Its great that you held back with details and stuck to the leather-suit theme!
However, the bunny-ears ruined it all imo. They totally throw away the badass feeling and rush you into the human female meta area. Delete the bunny-ears and its a nice look!
2016-08-12 15:37

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