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AnaChronism Fashion Guru | First of all- welcome to this website and I hope you are having fun here ^^ It's always nice to see others that are brave enough to share their looks with the others and I am glad you did that! First of all I am really happy that you managed to specify your armour and the dyes and that you even managed to write a small and nice description! ^^ Btw you don't neccessary have to specify all the weaponskins or backpieces that you think are suitable you could also just write those in your description while you are able to specify those skins you are actually using. But now to your look: I actually like this mixture between Carapace and cultural armour. I think the bottompiece looks really nice in combination with the top! The scarf on the other hand is actually the only armour piece that I wouldn't use here. Most of the times this skin looks out of place or simply doesn't fit to the overall look and sadly it's also not fitting here at all. Have you maybe tried some different shoulderpieces? Maybe nothing too bulky but I am sure that you would be able to find something more fitting. Actually I like the mixture between white and purple and I think in combination with your Asuras haircolour it looks very beautiful but have you mabye tried out a different, third colour that would still match your theme and would spice your look up a litte bit better? I think it's always nice to have more than two dyes you are simply losing some details and nice combos that you could create here! I think the whole purple weaponset would look really neat btw on your character. You could go for a mix of course and keep at least Bolt since it's a weapon that fits to most looks. Now to the screens: I would really love to see some more of your little Asura and I would love to see some screens that are not only taken by night! Sadly the "darkness" around you isn't giving me a good chance to get a better look at your armour and the dyes and I think your character deserves some more and interesting screens. Take your time and think about some locations where you could capture some nice shots I am sure you could come up with something neat! ^^ And also the easiest way to give us a screen in a natural light is always at least one form the character login screen. One is actually enough it gives us the chance to see everything in a good and neutral light. If you need some help in taking nice screens (also close ups and action shots) I am glad that I still have Miggs link here he posted some time ago. It's really helpful for those who just started doing these things. https://translate.google.es/translate?hl=es&sl=es&tl=en&u=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.guildwars2-online.com%2Fforo%2Ftopic%2F11097-gu%25C3%25ADa-capturas-de-pantalla%2F I hope that my comment was a little bit helpful and that you didn't find me too harsh. I don't want you to leave this site already and I really think that your cute Asura has a lot of potential and that you are already going into a very good direction. There are just some tiny details that you could work on and you are good to go :3 Don't hesitade contacting me if you need any help or if you changed something! |
2016-06-02 19:23 | |
Evrae Stylist | Hey thanks for the feedback I'll look into a third colour and new shoulders this evening. I'll also try and get some better screens in although your link does not seem to work. |
2016-06-03 9:52 in reply to AnaChronism | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | I meant to comment on this earlier, but by now you actually corrected pretty much everything I wanted to criticise! The light blue you added fits perfectly! She totally feels like a classic mesmer to me and you matched the back piece quite well; on top of that I totally love all the weapons yoi chose, they are all spot on I appreciate that you provided us with a plethora of screens, though I do think you could still work on the quality a little (especially playing with the field of view slider a little more), but you made an effort an that is great to see! Gold and I hope to see more from you ^^ |
2016-06-04 3:05 | |
AnaChronism Fashion Guru | Ah yes, I see so much improvement here and I am really glad that I could help a little bit (though the link seem not to work for you but you managed to create some really pretty screens without this additional tutorial :3). I really enjoy the screens you provided they are really beautiful and I am so happy that you added another dye to the colourscheme. She really looks great and that much effort deserves gold!! |
2016-06-04 6:47 in reply to Evrae | |
Evrae Stylist | Thank you for the feedback everyone. As for the FOV I will take notice of it for further looks, I always play on max FOV so I can see my surroundings optimally during combat. |
2016-06-04 8:26 | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | The FOV really is mainly for screens, if I´d run around in the settings I used for screening I would bump into walls all the time cause I can barely see anything xD |
2016-06-04 9:56 in reply to Evrae |