The Immortal Spirit of Fractal

By bdfddfew on May 30th, 2016
Race: Asura
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Grey
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i've tryed to do a nice combo of "cute" plus fractal, i haven't a lore in specific , hope you enjoy this


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AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
I think you managed to create an interesting and nice outfit devoted to the fractal weapon skins and the backpiece!
The armour combo is very Asura like and I like the skins you used though I am missing some shoulders here- maybe nothing too big and something subtile if you haven't searched for something already. Also I am not too fond of the glasses and I think your character looks so much better without those.
I like the dyes you used, this light greyish violet is a very nice colour that matches the fractal skins and combined with the black colour it builds up some nice contrast.
While I like the weapons you used here I am a little bit disappointed that you haven't incorperated those into your screens! I like that you chose a fractal- location but I think that this character would also look amazing at some other places and locations, maybe something in Rata Sum or Metrica Province?
Just think about adding some more screens to your look, that's the only big suggestion I am having here ^^
So far I think the only tiny changes you could think about are the glasses and maybe some additional shoulders and of course some more diverse screens. This look has really a lot of potential and actually one slot away from getting gold!
2016-05-30 18:35

bdfddfew
Wanderer
Thank you for the suggestion , i have no shoulder simply becouse the tier 3 coat hide all the shoulder, only the t3 shoulder will be visible with this armor, i'll take your tip of remove my glasses, and i will add some more screens ^^ , btw in the last thing i am not good , i am a realy bad photographer.
2016-05-31 9:13 in reply to AnaChronism

AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
Ah yes I forgot that the coat hides all the shoulders, my bad!
But I am very glad that you took some more screens and I have to say that it was a wonderful idea removing the glasses! Your Asura looks so much better without those and I really like your additional screens :3 You really chose some beautiful places in Rata Sum. Also I wouldn't say that you are a bad photographer! I had some struggles myself when i first started to take screens and it's more of a learing by doing process so don't worry :3
For those changes you really deserve Gold!
2016-05-31 10:40 in reply to bdfddfew

bdfddfew
Wanderer
awwwwww rly thank you!
2016-05-31 11:38 in reply to AnaChronism