Fairy floss princess
By KingPanda on May 28th, 2016 |
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Lilith Lumiere, Princess of all sweets and cute things.
Get on her bad side and she'll gut you like a siamoth and bathe in your blood... hehe jk i love you ;)
Comments
 AnaChronism Fashion Guru | First of all: Please do some more diverse screens somewhere where a portal like this one is not too distracting. I can't see anything of your character or the armour and the purple light is not doing you any favour. Also, camera settings are very important to take some nice screens. You can play around with the different settings and we would be able to get some screens where your Asura doesn't seem to be too far away to be seen! Think a bit more creative, find some nice locations and find some nice angles where it's able to see everything in a good light. Right now it's just almost unratable. To your armour- while I basically like the mix I am not very fond of the scarf. It doesn't fit at all and looks very random and I think there are way more shoulderpieces that would look better on your Asura. I actually like the pastel colours you used but using basically two different dyes is a little bit boring to me and creates more or less a pastel pink blobb and I think your character doesn't deserve it. Also I barely see any details of the armour and not just because Asuras are too tiny or because she is too far away on your sceens, it's actually beacuse the colours are giving me no chance to see any details. Think about a third colour you could incorperate here it doesn't have to be something dark but something that would spice the whole thing a little bit more up. All in all I think you payed some attention to your look and you even took a matching weapon and a matching backpiece but sadly your look is lacking of a proper presentation and a more interesting dye job :/ |
| 2016-05-28 7:54 |