Lady Phariah, Keeper of the Broken Land

By IL3gendarY on May 24th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: White
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(Diary Entry One: The Fallout)
"To whoever find this diary: This is a story about me, Lady Phariah, a High Noble in the Capital Divinity's Reach. Daughter of Lord Ronok, the Keeper of the City and the Holder of Oaths.

A war had raged in our Lands, villages pillaged by raiders and our mortal enemy: The Charr. The whispers about the devastation had filled my ears. I could not sit idly by alongside my family, while our citizens had been devourered by war. We ruled this land, we built this land, we should not let it be broken down by our enemies. I wanted to act.

At first light I left the capital, walked directly out of the massive gates that were my home. Without looking back I set off to a journey, not knowing where it would take me. Now I'm wandering through the vast lands that used to hold enormous castles my father told me about. The great stories of all the wealth, adventures and places, they all seem so far away now. This land is merely the rememberance of what was once a great bedtime story. Just plain rubble and stone. The remains of the houses now held by the lost pikes of the War.

Raiders come in the night, looking for what's left of the food and wine. I see them running through the night, scavaging what is left. Everything is broken, deserted, but we shall perservere. I will fight, in the name of my father, swear an oath as he did before me. No more blood shall be shed, no more women and children taken, men enslaved. This broken land shall be rebuilt, one stone at a time. I shall go to the free cities, rallying troops as I move West. We shall fight the Charr and let them regret the day they ventured into our lands."

(Diary Entry Two - The first City of Free Men Coming 25-6-2016)
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Lady Phariah, the Keeper of the Broken Land - Descendant of Lord Ronok, the Keeper of the City and the Holder of Oaths.

(I will write more story when she reaches more places, check back soon)


Comments


Elessar Taralom
Fashionista
I like your overall armour mix a lot! The monochrome dye scheme works really well for me here and the little golden details still keep it interesting!
Where I feel you could still improve a little are the screenshots; there could be a few more, preferable also some action shots, different locations....the whole package ^^
I do like though that you already gave her a little backgroundstory, really makes her come to life!
2016-05-24 15:45

IL3gendarY
Wanderer
Thank you for your input! I will improve the story a bit and make it bigger. I'll try to get some action shots in aswell tonight.

I really enjoyed making this so please check back and if you have more feedback, it's very welcome!
2016-05-24 16:38 in reply to Elessar Taralom