Multiple Character Concepts In Need of Feedback
By Garrius
on April 8th, 2016  |
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All suggestions are welcomed. I hope you find all concepts here enjoyable. :)
17/08/2016 Now updated with my new Uncultural Charr concepts (the first 7 pictures)
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 Eremite Fashionista | I'm not voting for this as yet since it is a work in progress. I must say though that all versions of your Charr is Gold worthy. |
| 2016-04-08 19:43 | |
 Garrius Fashion Collector | Awesome thanks a lot! If you got the time care to share your opinions for the other 2 Characters ? Just something brief as you did for the Charr. |
| 2016-04-08 19:51 in reply to Eremite | |
 Elessar Taralom Fashionista | For the Charr, I´d prefer the second option! It makes it look like warpaint or some kind of fur pattern, both of which is awesome! The red eyes don´t fit in very well imo, I´d definitely not use those For the Sylvari, if you wanna go with a desert look, this combination is fine; it is not THE mos original though. This might be one of the instances where the scarf would make sense as long as you make it uni as opposed to striped As for dyes, the green variants feel a bit off; instead, I´d set some more darker areas with a dye like Charred for example, since it´s a little TOO light and monochrome for my taste right now The Asura is really cute and I agree with you about the top half already looking good For the pants I am in favour of the Guild Pants, they look the most interesting to me Dyewise I´d change a lot actually, as for now it feels disconnected and colourful for the wrong reasons; I´d drop the blue and instead incorporate the red from her hairdo Seeing that you are using a flame-type staff, maybe also go with that dye scheme: a dark brown or even orange as the base colour with gold and red accents feels compelling to me I also really like the Koda headpiece on her I hope I could give you some valuable feedback! ^^ |
| 2016-04-09 5:38 | |
Garrius Fashion Collector | Your feedback is immensely appreciated Elessar ! Thank you for taking the time in writing such a comprehensive feedback ,you really gave something to think about ! :) |
| 2016-04-09 10:03 in reply to Elessar Taralom | |
 Conncept Trendspotter | I agree with Elessar on the charr, the first doesn't create any interest around the face, and the third muddies the concept with distracting effects. I think some good inspiration for the sylvari would be to go a bit more natural with the dyes. Look up a picture of what's called a Desert Lily, I think it'll match what you are looking for. On the asura, whatever boots you go with need to be black. Having a gradient of contrast working down the body will cause peoples eye to follow that contrast right off the character, failing to catch the eye in any particular place. Other than that, I'd say don't go with the vigil pants, too busy. |
| 2016-04-09 10:22 | |
Garrius Fashion Collector | Thanks for the feedback. You ideas are very much appreciated ! :D |
| 2016-04-09 10:36 in reply to Conncept | |
 frederickx Fashionista | Charr is cool, the rest are okay. The sylvari needs a bit of work though imo |
| 2016-04-09 16:53 | |
Garrius Fashion Collector | Got it. Thank you for leaving your feedback! |
| 2016-04-10 10:07 in reply to frederickx |
