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Pattou Fashion Guru | To me, it looks like a mess of special effects, there's too much things on it. I think that I get what you wanted to do, but there's too many shiny stuff which is so different that you can't tell what is what. The screens are good by the way ! |
2016-04-07 17:25 | |
pukystyle Stylist | That's true, I think the Winter's Presence might be contributing to the mess. It should balance if it's turned off. Thanks for your review :) |
2016-04-07 17:28 in reply to Pattou | |
KestrelGirl Fashionista | Gotta agree with Pattou. Take out the Winter's Presence, use the illusory weapons (if you can afford them!) instead of basically everything but The Anomaly, and you're good to go. That armor and dye combo is surprisingly great as is though, nice job! |
2016-04-07 18:15 | |
pukystyle Stylist | It's funny because I have every single Ectoplasm Weapon there is (I obviously skipped Lyss when I made Ilya, because it was completely redundant and Usoku's Needle is a drop). I can see those as viable options, but they might be too bright. I'd like to try that, but I'm out of charges though so I can't really play with them atm. Thanks for the review :) |
2016-04-07 18:26 in reply to KestrelGirl | |
KestrelGirl Fashionista | Woah, I admire your effort (or luck). Make some moneyz, get some TCs, and show us V2! I think the illusory weapons will go great with the outfit :D |
2016-04-07 19:00 | |
Elessar Taralom Fashionista | There is a lot of good stuff happening here and some stuff that needs improvement While the armour mix in itself is not necessarily the most original one, it still works, so apart from switching out Winter´s Presence I wouldn´t change much Dye wise it falls a little flat, I like the black and gold, but I´d maybe add a third dye; how about one of the brighter pastel colours from the wings? Something like a light violet maybe The weapons are okay imo, except from the shield maybe Your screens are already great and I can see that you also put a lot of time in the description, so those two things are definitely goldworthy ^^ If you work on some minor details, this is a goldlook for me! |
2016-04-08 4:13 | |
pukystyle Stylist | Yeah, switching out the presence is definitely something I'll do (excess particle effects, now that I look back, I kinda regret doing this since it's something I completely overlooked). On the dyes I also agree. Even though I'd like to add a third dye (it did cross my mind), adding it would change the colors a bit too much due to how the dye channels and the areas they cover (some b areas would turn too bright). Now that you mention a pastel violet tone, I was actually using an Electro Purple dye before choosing the Lemon Zest specifically because it matches the purple details on the wings. KestrelGirl suggested using Ectoplasm Weapons, which might combine well with Electro Purple. As soon as I get some Transmutation Charges I'll work on a V2.0 using what has been suggested so far (I'll try both weapon sets). Thanks a lot for your review! :) |
2016-04-08 8:24 in reply to Elessar Taralom | |
Zeppeli Fashion Collector | I don't want to be harsh but you could do better. It looks like a clown suit as it is. "Some of this and some of that... ta~daa~" I mean, almost everything is shiny and expensive or hard to get as individually. But it doesn't mean that they look okay together. |
2016-04-08 11:57 | |
pukystyle Stylist | It's ok. I respect your personal opinion. Doesn't look like a clow suit to me. I'm not expecting to please evreryone's taste since that's impossible. I'd appreciate it you could add some constructive ideas to improve it like the others. |
2016-04-08 12:13 in reply to Zeppeli | |
inferno Trendspotter | Woah i think it looks great! really caught my eye and it has this Victoria's Secret look which im loving it! Gold from me! |
2017-05-22 5:04 |