Bubblegum Fairy
By zcocota
on March 27th, 2016  |
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My pink/blue fairy look mesmer.
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 Hylek Fashionista | This could actually be a nice fairy look, but pls ... one screen ... Put more effort in your presentation and you might get good votes! This way i cant give you anything, sadly. |
| 2016-03-27 18:31 | |
 zcocota Wanderer | i took some new screens, what do you think is missing or can be improved. Also i am very bad at this english thing and i can't think of any description. and thanks for your comment i appreciate the feedback. |
| 2016-03-27 19:40 in reply to Hylek | |
Hylek Fashionista | Nice to hear that you take feedback and want to improve! I will tell you in detail what im about to expect from a Gold look and compare it to this look if you dont mind: First of all the style itself has to be good looking of course! Important for that factor are the armor-comb, the dye-scheme, the theme of a look and last but not least the weapons/backpiece. In your case the armor-comb is quite bland, since it is only carapace pieces. However the dyes are quite well chosen as far as i can tell from your screens and fit your theme (which appears to be "fairy") quite well! So for the theme itself you did well, actually! The backpiece is also well chosen and matches your fairy-style! What i am missing are fitting weapons! The weapons dont have to be the ones you actually use in game, but to present the look here they should fit your style! The next part of a good presentation would be a nice description. Some people even write small stories for their characters or looks, but that isnt even necessary. It is already enough if you write about the thoughts you had for your look. For example why did you choose to only use carapace pieces? Why did you choose these colours? What did you try to resemble, what was your theme? Just tell us what your idea and inspiration was, it doesnt have to be much, but it helps us to get into your look when you explain it a bit! Now the probably hardest part, the screens: Here too, you should try to match your theme if possible and take screens which are fitting for it. In your case it would be "butterfly" or "fairy". You could take screens with pretty flowers or magical forests to put your look into the right scenery. The important aspects are background, lighting and poses! With "background" i mean that the area, seen in your screenshot, is supposed to be pretty and well visible. In your main picture the background is quite pretty with the windows, candles and light-rays it looks very magical (it doesnt fit the fairy theme too good though). You 3 new screens could have a more interesting background in my opinion (as i mentioned: flowers or magical places, fitting for a fairy). The lighting is important to see your character and the colours of your armor in a good way. In all your screens your character is not too dark and not hidden by effects. The last part "poses" should show us your character in a variety of actions, preferably fitting for your theme! In all your screens your character is just standing around, which is a bit boring. Some of the animations that a character does while standing still are quite nice for taking screens tho! Other than that you could use emotes, weapon skills (these "action-screens" are pretty hard to get though, it takes some time and effort to get pretty ones) or simply turn your character around while taking the screen. The camera options are a nice way to adjust the view on your character, so the screenshots will look more interesting. Also you should try to zoom in as near as possible, while still seeing your whole character. So ... that is all i can think of for now ^^ If you like, you can add me in game, if you have any questions! (my account-name is in my bio) I hope you are still motivated to present us your looks with more effort! :) The more time you put into your look and the presentation, the more we can appreciate it! |
| 2016-03-27 21:24 | |
Hylek Fashionista | I forgot to mention that many people would like to see a screenshot from character-selection or hero panel. This is basically to see your look in neutral light and closeup. Character selection screens are the easiest to take, but they dont show backpieces and weapons. So if your backpiece and weapons are an important part of your look, you should take a screen from hero panel and cut out your character. Of course you can show both screens, or even edit them together to give a wider overlook of your style! |
| 2016-03-27 21:41 | |
 Eremite Fashionista | i rarely like bright colors but this looks really fitting and vibrant to me! just like the butterfly! gold from me =D |
| 2016-03-28 9:10 |
