The Master Chief

By Vetkin on March 20th, 2016
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Armor: Heavy
Color: Green
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John-117 aka the Master Chief.


Elessar Taralom
The combination of armour and the dyes itself are actually pretty good for the look you want to achieve; I can definitely see Master Chief in here
Your presentation is a bit lackluster though, especially your screens
Get familiar with the Camera Options (especially horizontal/vertical position and point of view) and try to find a fitting screening location (since you are going for smth futuristic, there are countless fitting locations around the Asura maps)
A bit more description also cannot hurt; if you work on your presentation I think you can really make some great looks here!
2016-03-21 9:49

Fashion Collector
Thanks for the feedback! And in terms of screenshot location: I just want to show the outfit, not the background or something, that's all ¯\_(?)_/¯
2016-03-24 6:47 in reply to Elessar Taralom

Elessar Taralom
Problem is that your screenshots prevent you exactly from doing that: the lighting isn´t good in the guildhall (it tampers the dyes mostly), you are mostly facing away from the lightsource anyways and your character is tiny and kinda lost in the screens, because you are zoomed out so far
If simply showing your character is your only goal here, just twist your character around a bit in the character select, at least we can see everything there, but screenshots are one of the rating criterias after all
2016-03-24 7:22 in reply to Vetkin