Zvoltanks, Corrupt Norn WIP
By ZvolTx
on February 24th, 2016  |
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This is my guardian Zvoltanks. I'm going with a part-corrupted by Jormag look to go along with my Kralkatorrik corrupted Thief, Zvolteh.
I am still working on getting the Herald Shoulderpiece to go with it, and I'd like help/suggestions for anything else I could change. The t3 legs I would really like to get rid of and have something else in its place but I haven't figured out what I could replace it with quite yet.
Also please comment on the dyes! I didn't want to bother looking through the expensive dyes to see if any of them would work well with it aside from the ones I already have, but I'd love ideas for dyes to do!
Also these are just my testing screenshots since I'm not 100% finished with it yet!
Comments
 AnaChronism Fashion Guru | I actually like the T3 legs they go really well together with the other armour pieces. I also like the dye scheme it's fitting to your Jormag- related look. In general I really like him I think he looks quite nornish and I love how the hair and the tattoos are a nice detail to your overall look. I am not really sure about the Herald shoulders you wan't to get for him but maybe first I have to see how it looks on him. Would love to see the finished look! :3 |
| 2016-02-24 6:47 | |
 Pattou Fashion Guru | I'm not sure with the shoulder piece you want to go for, but I really like the rest. Maybe if you use a blue dye from the "Flame and frost" collection it could be good, instead of one of the grey dyes ? Good look anyway :) |
| 2016-02-24 8:42 | |
 Eremite Fashionista | I find your main picture pure gold. It's very good imo. If you'll just add a few more good screens and maybe a short story, its a straight gold to me. |
| 2016-02-24 9:17 | |
 Elessar Taralom Fashionista | Wow, love this character! He feels very true to lore without feeling uninspired or boring at all his white tattoos and hair really tie this together for me and I love the armourpices you chose; since I am not that used to male Norn I don´t really know how boots look on them, but maybe the T1 cultural boots? Since most of the shoulders are ridiculously gigantic on male Norn I´d even rather settle for no shoulders at all than using a second choice; I can imagine though that the Herald shoulders help bringing the corrupted aspect across Dye-wise you might want to give Glint´s Sanctuary a look? But actually I don´t think you need to change anything there, looks perfect and frosty already! I am really looking forward to the finished product! |
| 2016-02-24 9:22 | |
 Hylek Fashionista | Hey! I really love your character! His face tats and the Mask of the Wanderer come together so perfectly! He looks awesome! Now to the armor: The first thing i noticed is the"iron" dye on the chest piece, i think it sticks out a bit too much cuz its so dark. As Elessar suggested, the Glint dyes might be an option for an icy appearence. Also "Shiver Sky" might be worth a try. To the concerns about the Herald shoulders ... i understand that it might look out of place, but on the other hand, if you dye them correctly they could look like a chunk of ice on his shoulder which would be SUPER cool, literally ;D T1 shoulders might also be an option. I wouldnt change the chest piece because i like how the tattoos shine through. I think the gloves are a bit too big. You could try the twilight arbor ones or the arah gloves ... i can imagine with the right dyes they could look like ice too! Just some ideas ;) Id love to see the final result :D |
| 2016-02-24 10:23 | |
 Acethyle Fashion Guru | He looks so cool and unique already. I love the hair, the white tattoos and his white eyes! For me the dye job is almost perfect. The colors reflect the theme you're going for. Maybe try something lighter than iron on the coat ? I like the t3 legs too. But I'm not sure about the gloves and boots. They don't look really good together imo. I think I would change the boots! Maybe the mistward warboots ? With nice dyes they could look like ice, and they could fit the herald shoulderpiece ;) I can't wait for more screens and the final look! But it's a gold already :) |
| 2016-02-24 10:41 | |
 Purgatori Fashion Guru | This is one of the best male Norns ive ever seen. Norns are all my main characters and I love to see people take the time to tweak them and make them amazing! Im not sure that I would change anything tbh I would be interested to see if you find anything that could make him any better than he already is because WOW |
| 2016-02-24 11:12 | |
 KestrelGirl Fashionista | Perfect! Gold, and he'll be even better after getting that shoulderplate! |
| 2016-02-24 13:10 | |
 ZvolTx Stylist | Thanks so much for the feedback everyone! @Everyone suggesting Glint dyes - Thanks I'll give them a look! @Hylek - That's exactly what I was thinking in regards to the shoulder piece. It's got that crystaline/icy part to it that I am hoping will work well with the corrupted image. @Acethyle - I can't seem to find the boots you're talking about, but since the boots I'm using was more of a "this looks good ill just do this for now" kind of thing I definitely am looking to change them. Thanks again everyone for the help :) |
| 2016-02-24 19:08 | |
ZvolTx Stylist | Oh nevermind it doesn't show the boots in the wardrobe because I haven't unlocked them, definitely a good choice! |
| 2016-02-24 19:10 | |
 Cuddy93 Stylist | You could go with Dolyak, Eagle or Barbaric legs (there's no need for every single piece to be a different set, you know). Other than that, another suggestion I'd have is if you have a makeover kit, go with paler skin and get blue tattoos. |
| 2016-02-25 6:53 | |
 RedIvy Fashion Guru | This works very well! I can see him with very epic mega huge weapons to crush people faces and noses! I like the screens. Also, the work with the dyes is just so perfect to my taste! With the adequate shoulderplate, it would be even more perfect :p can't wait ^^ |
| 2016-02-25 11:07 | |
RedIvy Fashion Guru | *the weapons you choice are great, but there is only one screen were we can see them, hint what I was saying ^^, also, gold. |
| 2016-02-25 11:09 | |
Nice Fashion Guru | Very good! |
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