The Oxblood Dragon

By Flyingchicken on February 23rd, 2016
Race: Norn
Gender: Male
Armor: Medium
Color: Red
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Norn ranger enjoying the view of Divinities Reach



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KestrelGirl
Fashionista
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2016-02-24 0:26

AnaChronism
Fashion Guru
Okay, first the title screen is definately not enough. Make more screens a ranger is a PERFECT class to get some nice diverse screens.
Second the armour mix itself is not really existing. Taking one set besides the headpiece is quite boring and not original or creative at all. You could try to bring in some other pieces you would do a favour to your character!
The dyes though are not bad and I think it's at least a nice base to start with.
Also you could try to make a better description just tell was what your look is all about and what your intentions were when you created it. You don't have to write a whole story but it would be interesting to read why your character looks like that.
I suggest you to rethink your armour choices and please, more screens!
2016-02-24 6:52

Blackstar
Fashion Collector
This is too basic, AnaChronism gives some good suggestions.
2016-02-24 10:38