Traveler of Lyssa

By Madison on October 19th, 2015
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Armor: Light
Color: Purple
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Hi guys! This is my first look on the site and was looking for some help/tips. I know the look isn't that original but I'm planning on getting better. So whatever thoughts you have please leave them below :) (Also I know the screens aren't that great of quality, I don't really know how to take good ones, so if you could share it would help me a lot :D)


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Annette Langmar
Fashion Guru
hmm. Well for starters I think the dye scheme is too dark, You end up losing depth and detail, so its hard to even tell what youre wearing right now, so try to be mindful of your dyes.

You could work on the proportions of your outfit as well. In this case its very top heavy, with the scarf and the skirt on the pants demanding all the attention. This leave your legs looking... like chicken legs, to be frank. I'd try a boot or at least something with more volume, because as is you look like a big gust might topple you over.

You should try messing around with some dyes and then leave some new screenshots or start a new post. I'd like to see what you can do with a brighter colour scheme
2015-10-20 0:10

Ariel Charming
Trendspotter
wowwwwwww she is pretty
2018-08-02 18:50