|I really like the gold you're using for the metal parts. Maybe try Iron dye for the cloth bits? If i remember correctly lion's arch guard colours tend to be blue and gold, maybe with some brown accents. For the brown i recommend cocoa dye. Theres also this rust dye im forgetting the name of that's very nice|
|If this was inspired by Lion's Arch, you'd have a bunch of random underwater creatures just chilling on you like the new Sea World buildings! ;D|
Seriously though, this looks really nice! I agree with Annette that adding some blue tones into the mix would help give it a better Lion's Arch feel. The bits you have now are fine, but adding a bit more the the leggings and top might help out even more!