|Doesn't look like much effort was put in, simply because it is a leveling look after all - every second norn running around looks something like this. The issue is that the look attempts to represent the common denominator, but doesn't do enough to stand out from being part of it.|
Suggestions: add more dye colour variation (i.e. not red), maintain dye consistency (i.e. not light pink + salmon pink), and have some more armour diversity.