|I like the look except I think the gloves really clash, also I would use something slightly lighter than abyss in some areas so you can bring out some of the details in the armor.|
Also try to take a higher resolution screenshot and maybe put it through a photoshop filter if you want to really show off the look.
As your armor stands now I would probably give you a silver but I think you could get a gold with some slight changes. I really like the way your boots and legs go together as well as your mask and shoulders, I wish I could see the chest to judge it fairly but the abyss hides too many details for me.
All in all nice look!